OH MY GOSH
No really nice job you are a very good violin player (btw you can just say orchestra)just some critism it sounds like you rushed your own tempo(if you had one) a little in the middle you had excelent transitions from melow to bright i really liked that it would have been nice if you included some bass in there(yes i am a bass player old skewl stand up bass u should know what that is!!!) as well as a cello for that sad theme your going for. other wise nice friggen job your a xtreme violin player!